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10 ES 8: 8 Replace “low probability high-impact” by “low likelihood high-impact” 10 10.1. 1 10: 36 Replace “Li et al., 2020b” by “Q. Li et al., 2020” 10 10.1. 1 10: 24 Add often in “small spatial scales have an influence”:“small spatial scales often have an influence”; add the reference (Sandu et al., 2016) after (Palmer, 2013) https://agupubs. onlinelibrary. wiley. com/doi/full/10.1002/2015MS000564 10 10.1. 2 11: 20-36 Change the caption of Fig. 10.3 to “Schematic diagram to display interacting spatial and temporal scales relevant to regional climate change information. Adapted from Orlanski (1975). The process included in the different models and model components considered in Chapter 10 are indicated as a function of these scales. The various types of models (including global and regional climate models) for constructing regional climate information are assessed in Section 10.3. 1 and Box 10.3.” 10 10.1. 2.2 12: 2 Replace “Brown et al., 2012a” by “A. Brown et al., 2012” 10 10.1. 2.2 12: 34-35 Replace “Dong-feng et al., 2017” by “Zhang et al., 2017” Replace “Cai et al., 2018a” by “L. Cai et al., 2018” 10 10.1. 2.2 12: 47 Replace “Sylla et al., 2018a” by “Sylla et al., 2018” 10 10.1. 3.1 13: 28-30 Remove “Over the ocean, the increased radiative forcing leads to an increase in latent heat flux and a decrease in sensible heat flux, while over land, water availability is limited and increased radiative energy is therefore converted mostly into sensible heat (Sutton et al., 2007).” as it is considered unnecessary and could be controversial.